Fading Laughter [MLP Fan Art] (Commission)

It looks pretty good. The hair is a bit too frizzy though. the shading is looking pretty nice but maybe if you shaded a darker color in the shape near the edges it would look a little better. Pinkie Pie's eyes are bigger than that and i know she is supposed to be squinting but overall her eyes look too small. a n d n o w i h a v e t o f i l l i n t h e r e s t o f t h e s p a c e s o y e a h.